2016年6月18日雅思考試寫作真題

　　Task 1 柱圖 寧波新東方 汪宇紅

　　The table gives information about annual salaries of five employment sectors in Australia in 2006.

　　分析：靜態(tài)表格，如果只是一味地描寫數(shù)據(jù)，肯定得不了高分，靜態(tài)數(shù)據(jù)圖的關(guān)鍵在于尋找數(shù)據(jù)之間的關(guān)系，并且用不同的句式表達(dá)出來。

　　Sample answer

　　The table compares how much Australians earned in five different employment sectors in the year of 2006.

　　Salesmen were more likely to get the highest income of $216,100, when compared with people in other industries, while the lowest minimum salary could also be found in this sector. The gap between the maximum salary and the minimum salary was smaller in engineering, with $145,080 and $38,500 respectively. The employees in IT and telecommunications also earned a great amount of money. The maximum salary was up to $100,080, which was about three times as much as the minimum salary. The figures for education and traveling were similar, with maximum salary standing at around $68,000 and minimum standing at approximately $32,000.

　　In these five sectors, the average wages of IT and telecommunications was $79,000, which was just second to that of engineering ($80,000). The people recruited in sales area earned $70, 000 on average. When it comes to education and traveling, the average salaries were much lower ($50,000 and $45,000 respectively).

　　Overall, the people in the industries of sales, engineering and IT and telecommunications earned much more than those in the other employment sectors.

　　Task 2

　　分析：

　　題目的類型屬于report。 話題類別屬于犯罪與青少年教育。在段落分配上，原因?yàn)橐欢危�措施為一段，或者原因及其�?duì)應(yīng)措施為一段。

　　范文主體思路分析：

　　原因一：不穩(wěn)定的家庭因素導(dǎo)致，父母以暴力方式教育孩子給孩子留下不好的影響

　　對(duì)策一：父母改變溝通交流的方式，多和孩子交流互動(dòng)，更多關(guān)心愛護(hù)孩子尤其是情緒上的需要

　　原因二：過度的媒體暴力，孩子們自制力的缺乏容易模仿熒幕里的英雄們的暴力行為

　　對(duì)策二：政府可以建立起熒幕審查與分級(jí)制度，控制熒幕上的暴力數(shù)量

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　　In recent years, the proportion of crimes committed by teenagers has increased dramatically and thishas caused a widespread discussion. Media violence and unstable family life may be the two main factors leading to adolescents’ criminal tendency. Both of them will be discussed in detail below, followed by solutions.

　　The lack of family life should take responsibility for juvenile delinquency. Most parents educate their children in an impropriate way like beating and abusing. Even now, may parents still hold a view that a good son is a product of the rod. This educational method will leave children a misleading impression about violence when they are very young, and they are more likely to become real offenders in the future. To solve this problem, parents should adjust parenting at home, interacting with theirchildrenmore frequently and giving more attention and care especially emotional needs.

　　Excessive exposure to media violence also plays a big role in the increase of youth crime. As we all know, the violence shots are prevalent in many films and TV games, which affects young people the most. Teenagers who lack self-discipline tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior after watching action films in real situations. Actually, these teenagers are misled by their heroes. In this case, the government should set a rating and censorship system in order to control the amount of violence, threat and horror on screen.

　　In conclusion, family life and media violence are main triggers of juvenile delinquency. Parents should transform their ways to care and educate their children. Meanwhile, governments should provide a healthy environment on the screen.

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